Dear Sir or Madam,
I have a few suggestions that may help you. First of all... work on your English. Particularly your grammar. We don't say things like "I want to learn you more." It's "I would like to get to know you better." And try using the word "pics" instead of photos. "Photo" sounds too formal when youre attempting to sound casual and it's more indicative of a physical photograph and not an online doctored one. Your spelling is decent so I can tell you know how to use a dictionary which is fine as long as you choose words we actually commonly use. But the biggest piece of advice I can give you is to try changing the amount that we have inherited. It's always 25 Million US dollars. That is a little excessive. Not all of us can fathom stashing away 25 million dollars in our bank account. I'm with a small local bank which I know for a fact only keeps at the most $30,000.00 cash between all the drawers and vaults at any given time. Stay around the 10k-50k ballpark and I bet you get more bites. Let me know if this helps. I admire your gall.
Sincerely,
Not impressed
